EDITOR NOTES - REVISION REQUIRED
This article shows strong technical depth and aligns well with Netrunnaz style, but requires specific revisions before publication:
CRITICAL FIXES NEEDED:
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Performance Claims - Add citations or qualify statements:
- "10x smaller footprint" needs source or change to "significantly smaller"
- "85-95% of native performance" requires benchmark citation
- "10-50x less memory" needs verification or removal
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Code Example Disclaimers:
- Add note that
mobilenet_v2.tfliteis placeholder - readers need actual model - Clarify that
prepare_input_image()is demo code, not production-ready - Update deployment paths to be generic examples
- Add note that
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Industry Claims:
- "Major players are shipping production implementations" - needs specific examples beyond Fermyon/WasmEdge
- Intel contribution claim needs direct source link
RECOMMENDED IMPROVEMENTS:
- Add performance disclaimer: "Performance benefits vary by use case and hardware"
- Include link to actual WASI-NN examples repository for working code
- Consider adding troubleshooting section for common setup issues
STRENGTHS TO MAINTAIN:
- Excellent technical accuracy on WASI-NN specification
- Strong sourcing for industry consensus claims
- Practical, complete code implementation
- Honest assessment without crypto/hype content
The core article is solid and provides real value. These revisions will ensure 100% accuracy while maintaining the technical depth readers expect.
STATUS: PENDING REVISION