Editor Notes - Required Revisions
Status: REVISE - Minor issues need addressing
Required Changes:
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Specification Date Clarification
- Address the 2025-06-18 specification date inconsistency
- Either explain this is a future version or use current version references
- Add brief note about specification versioning if relevant
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Technical Improvements
- Add brief context about system requirements for implementation examples
- Expand security implementation recommendations with 1-2 specific examples
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Style Refinements
- Soften opening paragraph slightly while maintaining direct tone
- Improve transition between "Industry Impact" and "Road Ahead" sections
Overall Assessment:
- Technical Accuracy: 95% - Excellent with minor date clarification needed
- Sourcing Quality: 100% - All claims properly sourced and linked
- Netrunnaz Style: 90% - Strong match, minor tone adjustment needed
- Reader Value: 95% - High-quality technical content
Recommendation: APPROVE after addressing specification date issue and minor refinements. This is high-quality technical content that provides genuine value to readers.